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<blockquote data-quote="clowned" data-source="post: 34599" data-attributes="member: 3674"><p>Lucid,</p><p></p><p>Thank you for your interest in joining the staff of Atomic.</p><p></p><p>The amount of grammatical and syntactical errors in the application is concerning, especially since you're applying for a position that requires excellent spoken and written communication skills. This also means knowing what letter needs capitalizing and where our commas and apostrophes go. Make sure you end each individual thought with the correct closing punctuation.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>How much playtime do you have on the server?</strong></p><p></p><p>You should post your exact server time. This just shows that you are putting your full effort forth into your application.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>What is your time zone?</strong></p><p></p><p>CTZ is an unfamiliar timezone to me and probably most others. I'm not sure if your posted this as a mistake or if you are using a lesser-known, abstract timezone.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>What time of the day (for you) are you usually on?</strong></p><p></p><p>Correct me if I'm wrong but I think you meant to say 4 PM. Not that I'm saying being available to staff for 21 hours a day is impossible, but unlikely.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>Why do you want to be a part of the AtomicRP Staff Team?</strong></p><p></p><p>While I believe your answer to the question is valid and concise; this is a large run-on sentence.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>Why should you be accepted onto the AtomicRP Staff Team?</strong></p><p></p><p>The only points I was able to gather from this statement are that you are a good listener, know where to find the rules, and that you are intolerant of bad behavior. I wonder if you could dive a little further into each of these individual points and offer more substance to your answer.</p><p></p><p></p><p><strong>Optional: Include any other information about yourself that you'd like the community and the management team to know about you.</strong></p><p></p><p>I would avoid pointing out your <em>shortcomings</em> in your application. You're supposed to be putting on your best face and displaying your best qualities. You pointed out "a few bad things about me are I sell myself short."— So don't sell yourself short!</p><p></p><p>Again this is a large run-on sentence. I don't know why this was originally bolded. You want to reserve format changes like that for very special details. Typically you don't want to bold an entire sentence.</p><p></p><p>-1</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="clowned, post: 34599, member: 3674"] Lucid, Thank you for your interest in joining the staff of Atomic. The amount of grammatical and syntactical errors in the application is concerning, especially since you're applying for a position that requires excellent spoken and written communication skills. This also means knowing what letter needs capitalizing and where our commas and apostrophes go. Make sure you end each individual thought with the correct closing punctuation. [B]How much playtime do you have on the server?[/B] You should post your exact server time. This just shows that you are putting your full effort forth into your application. [B]What is your time zone?[/B] CTZ is an unfamiliar timezone to me and probably most others. I'm not sure if your posted this as a mistake or if you are using a lesser-known, abstract timezone. [B]What time of the day (for you) are you usually on?[/B] Correct me if I'm wrong but I think you meant to say 4 PM. Not that I'm saying being available to staff for 21 hours a day is impossible, but unlikely. [B]Why do you want to be a part of the AtomicRP Staff Team?[/B] While I believe your answer to the question is valid and concise; this is a large run-on sentence. [B]Why should you be accepted onto the AtomicRP Staff Team?[/B] The only points I was able to gather from this statement are that you are a good listener, know where to find the rules, and that you are intolerant of bad behavior. I wonder if you could dive a little further into each of these individual points and offer more substance to your answer. [B]Optional: Include any other information about yourself that you'd like the community and the management team to know about you.[/B] I would avoid pointing out your [I]shortcomings[/I] in your application. You're supposed to be putting on your best face and displaying your best qualities. You pointed out "a few bad things about me are I sell myself short."— So don't sell yourself short! Again this is a large run-on sentence. I don't know why this was originally bolded. You want to reserve format changes like that for very special details. Typically you don't want to bold an entire sentence. -1 [/QUOTE]
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